Stargazer and Farlandi - Revised

I'd like to give a very big thanks to ~J-MacAttack for his very honest, yet positive input of a constructive critique of my 2 new underwater gargoyles, Stargazer and his very fair mate, Farlandi who call the coast of Monterey, CA home in Northern California. All of the pretty important info on how to improve the original sketch did lead me to take a photo of the critique in order to make good use of a good drawing's strengths into a pretty good drawing.

Would let you know I really enjoy drawing Gargoyles and Atlantean OCs. Delighted to use the idea of Atlantean jewelry and clothing for my noble, yet resourceful gargoyles.